IMHO oryginal makes more sense:
[...] materials found or offered on this website for any particular purpose.
Than reworded phrase:
[...]materials found or offered on this web site for any particular role.
3. Language & Behaviour
Thats a perfect fix for that part! If you can't read, read it twice! [/sarcasm]
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Also I believe the part about screenshooting is a bit messed up.
Screen-shotting use ''ALT+Printscreen'', paste in paint and upload to http://www.imageshack.us is always a good way to do it. do it. do it.
Taking few words away for clarity:
Screenshooting use "PrtScr", paste and upload is a good way to...
Its doubled anyway.
General observaton:
I like giving each rule its code that can be easily adressed. Yet I don't think those A's and B's need dots. Its not N'th rule.
I dont like overusing red, or rather one color. In oryginal verson we had clear division: ToS, & Rules. Red used to be the divisor. Bold, bigger black text divided subsections. I liked that. In the "updated" version we have everything divided by bold, red text with varrying size. Which is harder to notice at first glance.
At the current state I had to vote "No, its not an improvement" as rules list gained readability but overall document lost it and most of the rewordings were hardly noticable, if changed anything at all.